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The next time I think of you
I want it to be brief,
the kind of contemplation
a child gives the small brown leaf
smuggled indoors under his boot;
a momentary blur of syllables
before he discards it in the trash.

As it is now,
I see far too clearly each brittle vein
crinkling fine lines that stretch onward,
finally veering away from wretched pain and rage,
yet with no certain path.

My memories of you
are like fallen leaves,
composting sentiments and insights quietly
into fertile ground for life.
©2005-2009 ~soul-lozenge
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Daily Deviation

Given 2005-11-15

We've all been there, haven't we? When the memory of a person makes us wish we hadn't thought of him or her and we vow not to do it again. That's what Fallen Leaves by *soul-lozenge is about, and the changing of seasons that occurs afterwards; the hopeful autumn to a rotten love's summer. (Suggested by `RetroZombie and Featured by `imperfect)

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:icondavid-parr:
before of forgot all, is better get on in it and see, one last time before of sayd goodbye

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:iconsoul-lozenge:
I'm not sure I understand . . . are you leaving dA?

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"It's all right to be afraid, . . . because this part won't be like a comic book. Real life doesn't fit into little boxes that were drawn for it."
:iconsoul-lozenge:
Thanks. :hug:

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"It's all right to be afraid, . . . because this part won't be like a comic book. Real life doesn't fit into little boxes that were drawn for it."
:iconomen666:
I concur with thinking zombie. This is very well written which doesn't come as a shock from you. I like the way you have compared the memories of someone to a leaves as it goes really well. Kudos lol

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"D.A.Mckeown"

98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.
:iconsoul-lozenge:
Thanks! :D

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"It's all right to be afraid, . . . because this part won't be like a comic book. Real life doesn't fit into little boxes that were drawn for it."
:icondavid-parr:
YES I WILL, I´M IN VACATIONS NOW
:wave: see you in 2 weeks
nice poem

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:spotlight-left: Please visit my english gallery [link] :spotlight-right:
:iconmarylouue:
awesome, you could turn anything into an amazingly pretty metaphor...A ver, you could probably make something neat out of mice, beetles, cassette tapes, moose/meese, lizard, bleach, um, and probably a pencil...in short you're awesome :D

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My avatar is a mouse...
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It's times like these that I wish I could set people on fire with my mind.
:iconwizillusions:
I liked these lines the best.

the kind of contemplation
a child gives the small brown leaf
smuggled indoors under his boot;

You wrote a wonderful piece. :+fav:

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He had a cloak of gold
And eyes of fire
And as he spoke I felt a deep desire
To free the world of its fear and pain
And help the people to feel free again

From “The Wizard" by Hensley/Clark (Uriah Heep)
:iconc21d47sw:
*blank stare* So deep..... :+fav:

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Love isn't a state of perfect caring. It is an active noun like "struggle." To love someone is to strive to accept that person exactly the way he or she is, right here and now--and to go on caring even through times that may bring us pain." - Fred Roger

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